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CODENAME: Vespa by ~SS2-Gohan:iconSS2-Gohan:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

©2009 ~SS2-Gohan
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From sketch to completion within an hour, tidied up on Paint Shop Pro 7 (minor edits). Drawn on 30/05/09.

Constructive criticism always welcome.

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~Mitsuko-Mitsukai Jun 4, 2009, 8:42:42 AM
shes one cool chick ;P i like her alot! XP

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I have a monkey on my head o_O!?
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~Sapha Jun 4, 2009, 4:31:06 PM
I like the idea of the outfit ^^
But I must say that in this angle and pose, your character's breasts should be a little rounder on the sides, instead of being a flat line... But that's only what I noticed, in my opinion lol
The skirt, legs, hair and face are my favorite parts! =)

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~"SAPHA" IS...~
...studying Litterature in University and loving it!
...in love with her boyfriend!
...a reading/writing/anime drawing freak!
...an happy-go-lucky, creative and intellectually curious girl!
...herself, no matter what! ;p
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~SS2-Gohan Jun 10, 2009, 12:28:45 PM
Thanks! She actually reminds me a lot of you xD I think I kinda used you as a mental blueprint xP

*looks at the smaller version of the picture* Oh my god, what's wrong with her spine? .... ugh.

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Photography, Storyboards, Weaponry and Anime-style Art.
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~SS2-Gohan Jun 10, 2009, 12:32:31 PM
Thanks!! ^^
Yeah, I really suck at breasts xD Come of not having my own, you see...
She was supposed to be fairly flat-chested... but I think the main problem came in when I tried to draw the detail of her bra beneath her shirt (the inner curves of her breasts), and then not shading it correctly... ugh. Well, practice makes perfect ^^
And thank you so much ^.^ I really appreciate the feedback!

(Interesting fact: This is the first bra I've ever drawn o.o It may just be the straps, but this is the first one I ever actually planned to be there!)

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Photography, Storyboards, Weaponry and Anime-style Art.
Go to the Dirge:CoM Index: [link] ; Or the Introduction if you're new!: [link]
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~Sapha Jun 10, 2009, 4:45:58 PM
My pleasure =)
I'm sure you'll get better with a little practice ^^
But you're right, drawing breasts isn't easy, even for women artists loll
Like you said, a little training can surely help ;p

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~"SAPHA" IS...~
...studying Litterature in University and loving it!
...in love with her boyfriend!
...a reading/writing/anime drawing freak!
...an happy-go-lucky, creative and intellectually curious girl!
...herself, no matter what! ;p
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